Learning Log 15

1. Using a pre-created world is really good for Scaffolding
2. You need to know the rules to know when to break them
3. Using a pre-created world can help you focus more on story and characters.

1. Learning the rules and correctly breaking them
2. Filling out the story

1. Do these same factors still apply to an AU? Or would they switch around?

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